A new draft
Posted by Shirley Jo Finney on July 31st, 2007
Why did I ever agree to writing in this blog??
This morning I woke up to re-read my 2nd entry (panic). I promise never to write late at night again. I had to SOS Adam. Thank you, Adam, for watching out. (smile)
Well, I spoke with Lydia today. She has been busy re-writing our play. She sent pages to me and Emily. When I spoke with her this morning she said she is pleased with what she had done and knows there is more work to do. “I have to step back,” she said. We talked for a while, then she informed me she was going to bed. We hung up and I printed out the pages. I sat down in my favorite chair, looked out over the mountains, and inhaled a deep breath to center myself. I began to read. When I had finished, I spoke out loud: “No wonder she is tired, she has done major work.” The style of the piece is getting stronger. It flows. It is a good draft. (more…)